Revolutionaries in refrigerators
Feb. 14th, 2009 09:32 amOkay, Moon is a Harsh Mistress. I'm trying to get into your swing. I'm cool if people have a fond nostalgia for you. I thought I'd mention some of the points you make about gender on the Moon.
* women are "equal"
* women are "cherished"
* women rank somewhere between beer and horse racing
* women are scarce (10% of society) (why?)
* women are always sexy, and act sexy for the male gaze
* street harassment of women is totally fine and doesn't bother anyone
* as soon as girls hit puberty, they go out and have sex with whoever
* there is prostitution called being a "slot girl"
* there is higher class prostitution, not described
* normal man-woman relations include exchanging sex for gifts and dinner
* custom, but not law, decrees that non-consensual touch (man to woman) = rape
* for which the penalty is, likely as not, death by mob
* Therefore there is NO rape on the Moon. Ever.
Therefore right smack in the middle of the book, the spark that ignites the revolution is some soldiers presumably from Earth brutally gang raping and abusing an 18 year old woman "in other ways" (which I couldn't even parse; is that meant to mean torture, or other kinds of rape than PIV?) and then they presumably brutally rape and kill another woman. (("If rape it was") <<<<--- WHAT? ) It works perfectly; gang rape, a rumor and a poem or two, then about 20 minutes later "Luna was ours".
Some "revolution"!
The Moon seems to be a gang raped prostitute, not a harsh mistress.
I am annoyed by stories that use Women as nationalist symbols, women = The Land and rape as the fuel for patriotism. I get it, this is all the case and rape IS a tool of war, but -- this isn't my revolution.
* women are "equal"
* women are "cherished"
* women rank somewhere between beer and horse racing
* women are scarce (10% of society) (why?)
* women are always sexy, and act sexy for the male gaze
* street harassment of women is totally fine and doesn't bother anyone
* as soon as girls hit puberty, they go out and have sex with whoever
* there is prostitution called being a "slot girl"
* there is higher class prostitution, not described
* normal man-woman relations include exchanging sex for gifts and dinner
* custom, but not law, decrees that non-consensual touch (man to woman) = rape
* for which the penalty is, likely as not, death by mob
* Therefore there is NO rape on the Moon. Ever.
Therefore right smack in the middle of the book, the spark that ignites the revolution is some soldiers presumably from Earth brutally gang raping and abusing an 18 year old woman "in other ways" (which I couldn't even parse; is that meant to mean torture, or other kinds of rape than PIV?) and then they presumably brutally rape and kill another woman. (("If rape it was") <<<<--- WHAT? ) It works perfectly; gang rape, a rumor and a poem or two, then about 20 minutes later "Luna was ours".
Some "revolution"!
Her name was Marie Lyons; she was eighteen years old and born in Luna, mother having been exiled via Peace Corps in '56. No record of father. She seems to have been a harmless person. Worked as a stock-control clerk in shipping department, lived in Complex.
Maybe she hated Authority and enjoyed teasing Peace Dragoons. Or perhaps it started as a commercial transaction as cold-blooded as any in a crib behind a slot-machine lock. How can we know? Six Dragoons were in it. Not satisfied with raping her (if rape it was) they abused her other ways and killed her. But they did not dispose of body neatly; another civil service fem found it before was cold. She screamed. Was her last scream.
The Moon seems to be a gang raped prostitute, not a harsh mistress.
I am annoyed by stories that use Women as nationalist symbols, women = The Land and rape as the fuel for patriotism. I get it, this is all the case and rape IS a tool of war, but -- this isn't my revolution.